So I would love some intellegent critique of this piece, I've revised it several times and I want to know if it's submisible. If anyone would tell me what they think about the piece I would greatly appriciate it.

Thanks
Sans

The Next Time Satan Does a Jig
I
By our saying, things once invisible
can be captured. The time you poured alcohol
in our bathroom sink to see
if it really turned blue.
We will never know how
it was done, but my singed arms
hint at the outcome.
Revelation is not the wisdom of humanity,
only gods can say the way
things are really thought.
The only true tragedy is
you cannot be undressed for centuries.
How can anyone feel sad if no tragedy is ever true?
The betrayal came before the fall.
A tree grew up long after, another’s
temptation swaying sweetly from its branches.

II
The universe started with a song.
A voice pitching high and soft
then low and loud and higher again.
Black holes sing this song,
sucking in light and stars, dust
and dark for the purpose of recreation.
Universes, converses, reverses. What are we
but the verses of old songs?
Satan speaks in reverses.
All those Chicago records scratching
evil into our skulls.
Somewhere in the universe a cat waits
for a song to make it visible in life or death.
In the end it’s about mortality,
a change of pitch in the middle of a song.

III
Creation is the stuff of sunlight and stars.
A bit of dust coming together to make us real.
Please don’t evaporate me.
I’m too unique to become part of a cloud.
Rain clouds are the only way
I’d contemplate participation.
There is too much sunlight in the world.
The moon sometimes blushes,
hating that she is made inferior by a star.
Aren’t we just sympathetic evils?
It’s all relative anyway.
The true tragedy isn’t the fall
It’s the getting back up, making
Sense out of chaos.

Saturday, April 19th, 7pm - 2am

at my house as always, call, comment, or facebook for directions
^_^


Theme of the Month: Asia!

Bring any movie that is even remotely related to any asian culture

Movies I'm suggesting:
Je Li anything
House of Flying Daggers
Memoirs of a Gashia
Fruits Basket
DNAngel
we will vote and possibly have a Wii or at the very least a "dramatic reading"

Hope you all come,
Melinda

just wanted to say hi.

Hello ^_^

Movie Party this weekend Oct 6th 7pm-2am
at my house
Theme: Musicals

There will be a surplus of good food and chai tea. We might go on a walk if the weather permits and possibly have a little drama for all of the newcomers(tehehe)

You chose the movies and the entertainment.
Bring what you have and we'll vote like always.

Sorry to go into saleswoman mode, but I have a very beautiful book in my possesion that I am willing to part with, for a price. This book, like all of my others, is in excellent condition. It has the big man's signature on the inside title page, I love this book like a child, but I need money and am thus willing to give it up (and before you think it I would not sell my children).
If you're interested in buying it, please let me know.


I will now go drink some tea and start an exciting short story.



Love,
Luna

Movie Party!!!!!!

Sat. Aug. 18th 7pm-2am at my house

Come and celebrate one last time before school starts back

Theme: Humor Me
Let's make this funny, any movies that you find simply hilarious, bring them along and we can vote on what we watch.
There may possibley be food and drinks provided. Drinks by me, food because Patrick is supposed to be some sort of chef (and he said he'd bring an exmple of his work).

Possible movies:
I dunno, whatever I find that looks funny
What do you all think?

Who wants to go see the movie with me on midnight of the (16th I think) and go to the Barnes and Noble party Midnight on the 20th?

I'll be dressing up as either Harry or Draco depending on my hair dye situation.
I figure we can even do fanfic readings while we wait ^_^
I think it would be awesome, it'll be like a movie party except w/o movies and not at my house...

So reply to this note and we can toss around ideas, maybe even meeting at my house before hand.

Give me your email adress and I will send it to you, if I can figure out how.

In other news, I was thinking about throwing a party, just thinking though, nothing official.

In even more bland and useless news: A patron liked my 'unique' sense of fasion and style. She was 81 and getting her first library card. She used to be just like me when she was a girl. I was very pleased because she seemed to be the randy sort of old woman.

Live Journal was something that I always counted on. I was able to say, "I want to watch a sixteen year old boy have sex with a sixteen year old boy." and then post in my interests boy-on-boy action. i deleted a good portion of my interests. Innocent and not so innocent communities got deleted, but I thought this was our place to ban together and discuss are quirks with others. I mean, saying on your interests "boys younger than age 14 for the specific intention of rape and torture" should get you deleted. "Incest" should not. Hell, I'm interested in the psychology of incest, why should I have to change my wording to accommodate the delicate sensiblities of others?
I don't think I should. Thus, I have joined Innocence Jihad and fandom_counts. My friends you should as well.

and when I came back insde I couldn't see anything clearly. It was like the whole world had been covered in a vague glow, or maybe I had gold tinted light paper over my eyes. It made everything look softer, newer. It took at least a minute for it to fade away, after that I wanted to go outside so the world would be golden again.

I went to Chicago, had lunch with Renee, got swindled, and managed to get to work only an hour late. It was fun.

I look like a rabid mushroom lesbian.

Or some approxamtion thereof.
I also found good music, The Squirrel Nut Zippers. Everyone should check them out.

this means everyone and everything dam-nit

So I went to Pittsburg for this year's STD convention. It was fun, but dirty. I found a few interesting stores, talked to my friends a lot and played cards. I only got kicked out of one bar and making friends with drunk people from Missouri, or maybe Michigan. There was a Baptist Convention going on at the same time. All I have to say is that it was unnaturally weird. They were alomost posessed. The panel where I read my short story was with the other people who wrote fairytales. The modorator was nice, but his questions were stupid *pfou*

voting for the movie party begins on Thurs, nominate now!

Movie Party
Saturday,March 17th at my house
7pm-2am

Theme: chose your theme

Let's vote, if you respond before the next movie party your theme will be on the ballet. Three days before the movie party happens, I'll tally the votes and contact the winner. We will then go about getting the movies.

Games?

Dramas?

Fanfiction Readings?

YOU DECIDE

--only you can prevent man love (with me somewhere in the middle smiling like a loon)

yep I'm updating my journal because I'm bored. I've ran out of books to read and now I've exhausted all of the HP/SS HG/SS HP/DM HG/DM DM/HP/SS fanfiction known to the universe. Does anyone have any suggestions on some new reading materials? I'll try new pairings (but not het between RW/HG or HP/GW, that's just gross)so if you all who read this journal have any suggestionsm please let me know

Saturday Night Jan 13th 7pm-2am
@ my house
everyone is invited

Theme: Miyazaki
Princess Monoki
My Neighbor Totoro
Whispers of the Heart
Howl's Moving Castle etc....

if you don't know where I live see facebook, if you need directions or such call me

the asians are actually naked and male